Roll and Write

Today for writing we had to use our imagination. We got to roll the dice three times. The first time choose where our story takes place, the second one our main character and the third one the problem in the story.

I rolled a 6, 4, 4.

Here is my story.

When I walked in the cafe I saw a $2 coin. I picked it up and once I put it in my pocked everything changed. When I walked out of the cafe  at once I knew that it was the unlucky $2 coin.I shouldn't picked it up because it changed everything. So I through it away and ran away and didn't come back to the cafe. The next day I searched every wear  in my pock and it was not there. When I found it, it came back and I said "how did you get back"?  I screamed and I screamed every wear in my house!  Once I opened the door, I was about to through the unlucky $2 coin. Then a big splash of  goop wet me. And I said "you are very mean little old man"! But I didn't know that it was a fire breathing dragon so when I looked up I screamed! The dragon was angry because I was really  mean to him that he blew fire at me. I climbed the tall ladder, jumped in the pool and a man took my unlucky 2 coin and I said "take it if you like"! I called out for the fire breathing dragon. He saw the unlucky 2 coin in the man's hand and the dragon blew fire at him. The man ran away and the dragon followed him every day. Now I am happy but then I found a $2 coin and I picked it up and the story began all again.

Summer poem

Remember that time
you saw the birds flying across the sky
or people making big splashes in the pool
and the bright shiny sun gliding though the sky.
That was summer.

Remember that time
you felt the hot burning sand over your toes
or the hot sun melting down like an ice cream
and the salty water splash in your face.
That was summer.

Remember that time
you heard the birds whistling in the tree
or people having fun by the sea and crashing into big waves
and waves bowling people down the sea.
That was summer.

Remember that time
you smelt the salty sea mixed with salt and water
or you smell the food in the air when people cook their BBQ
or the smelly fish skeletons on the beach.
That was summer.

Remember that time
you tasted the salty sea on your tounge
the yummy ice cream melting down your chin by the very hot sun
or the lovey muscles when it is cooked.
That was summer.

Cinquin poem

Cave
Dark, dusty
Dripping, dropping, growing
Just look at it
Limestone.

Cave writing plan

Here is my Thinglink.

A Moment in Time-Tabloids

I saw lots of parents helping kids by walking beside them.

I heard lot of kids stamping like elephants.

I felt that it was hard to do kick the ball into the hard thing.

I wondered if my bean bag would land on the dot.

Proofreading writing practice

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today is the laste day of america's cup racing we all hope that we won it tody and bring the cup back
    New Zealand .                                                                              even                                     ! I
to NZealand We have been watching the races and some of us have evn made signs saying go NZ? it
              exciting                          frustrating            
has been exciteing to watch but also frustrat sometimes.

Character Description

Icebreaker looks evil she likes white and that is her favourite colour. Her hair looks like waves of wiggly worms. She has got an ice house in the snow. Her house looks smooth and icy like you are going to fall down it but she doesn't. She has got a Santa sleigh but it is white so she doesn't have to walk. She is not cold because she has got clothes made out of snow bear. She eats wood and people if is she is hungry. If she touches something which is not white it will turn into white and snaps it in half. She sounds like a normal person but she is evil. Her eyes look like a sleeping ghost she sleeps in the daytime but when someone sits by her she gets frightened and she wakes up.She is a witch and fights with the good people.

Writing with adjectives

WALT: Add description into our writing and use adjectives.


The ___ children laughed at the ___ clown

noisy
little
big
old
great
happy
small
mad
silly
nice
awesome
giggle
wigged
jigged


funny
clapping
red
sleepy
interdependent
fat
big

            The noisy children giggled at the sleepy clown.